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Originally Posted by Deadboy  Hulk RAGE! |
I always thought you’d turn red if bombarded with gamma radiation. Green’s just not rawk enough.
Okay—further criticism, let’s see what colour you turn: Nice touch making the first panel very complex and beautifully rendered—great initial impression and immerses you in the world/style quickly. Keeping latter panels simpler makes the characters and dialogue the focus. Good plan. Basically, you grab the attention and
then feed the story. Smart use of the longer form, and shows you can definitely handle more than just short Kreepy Kat strips. I’m no script expert, but I think the dialogue is a little out of sorts with the art and theme—this could be a more grown-up strip than it is, I think. The character study you posted suggests a character-driven satirical kinda thing, but the strip delivers something more slapstick. Fuck it though, if you’re going for silliness and fun then keep on truckin’. I think it’s really just the “Hahahaha, we showed that stupid bouncer” line that grated for me. Looking back over the strip again, it’s just that one line I’m bugged by.
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Originally Posted by Potatojunkie I want a mouse with a built-in speaker that bellows "CLICK!" whenever you click a button. Not an actual click, but someone heartily bellowing the word. And when I say 'someone' I mean Brian Blessed. |
This idea makes me very, very happy.
I wonder how much he would charge for voice-over work? I’d like him reading aloud all the alert boxes that pop up on a computer.
“Do you want to CANCEL? OR
CONTINUE?”
