Concept of time

[odins_ravens]

I am posting here today to give people the opertunity to give us feedback (good or bad) on our demo.


www.myspace.com/conceptoftime01

thanks for reading and we hope you enjoy it

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[djtoast]

I like Suffer in Silence. And I quite like the celtic-y feel at the Desolate Wastelands, but the jaggy section before the quieter bit (around 40 seconds?) could maybe do with being more staccato? - shorter, pointier notes to emphasize the rhythm.

However, the first 25 seconds or so of I Walk Away sounds a bit like the start of Careless Whisper (not the regular version, the 6:09 extended version - it's on limewire if you wanna see what I mean), except an octave lower Sorry!

Also, you can't embed flash in a post, but you can get youtube videos to appear inline, if you wanna let people hear your demo in threads you could whack it up on youtube and a link to the youtube page will automatically parse in your post.