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    A song for you....

    Rite something I wrote one day and I decided to put it up and you can put some critiscm up (*Sp?) but it has to be constructive so here it is its a bit personal but hey you guys are like a family?....

    Time Gone Before

    The times where we dared
    To be ourselves and branch out
    To strangers who we had never met
    And let actions speak,
    and let all past experiances
    Burn in defeat. As we the choosen few
    rise to our feet and Take charge
    And rise in the face of adverstity

    The times we shared, never forgotten
    the times we cared, never forgotten
    The times where love turned sour and rotten,burn in hate
    The faces we saw that had no identity, yet we still hate

    Memories will last forever, and your impact has affected me
    I really let you get to me, get under my skin and get the best of me
    Take me to places I've never been and shown me things I've never seen
    Let the lime-light fall to me, on my shoulders
    The weight of you expectancies on me
    You turned out to be the person that you never seemed to me
    Like you would ever be
    That was my expectations of you and I guess what I always thought of you was wrong

    The times we shared, never forgotten
    the times we cared, never forgotten
    The times where love turned sour and rotten,burn in hate
    The faces we saw that had no identity, yet we still hate

    The turn falls to me and I watch you gaze fall upon me
    I stand and put brave face for whatever you throw at me
    You stand and put all your troubles on me
    And I turn and walk away from everything you've put on me
    I watch you continue your rage even though I'm gone
    and I sit wonder what went wrong...
    was it me, you or both of us failing in Love
    Watch it begin and end helplessly know that if I had the chance again
    I would change it
    Welcome To The Rest Of Your Life.

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    Re: A song for you....

    personally i like it, you seem to have put a lot of thought and feelings into it which comes through and i really like it.

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    Re: A song for you....

    thanks KK that means alot to me
    Welcome To The Rest Of Your Life.

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