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4th March 2007, 12:11am
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#1 | | Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2005
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| Break-in with a twist
Hello again. Made this video about a masked thief (who has broken into the house) demanding money from a man. It would be a crime thriller with a twist (that you'll see in the end).
video here - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tfn-vuuuDnM
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4th March 2007, 12:17am
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#2 | | Tannhauser Gate Veteran
Join Date: May 2001 Location: On the moral high ground - And armed!
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| Re: Break-in with a twist
Video not available.
You gonna take any constructive criticism onboard this time?
Or will you wait until you've got a year left?
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4th March 2007, 12:18am
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#3 | | Hiphopopotamus
Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Between 2 field
Posts: 20,469
| Re: Break-in with a twist
your chances of making it big are small because your films are awful. thats all. nothing to do with age
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4th March 2007, 12:32am
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#4 | | Experimental stooge
Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Muffled 'bang'
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| Re: Break-in with a twist
Well what a twist...
I reckon 90% of the folk on here with access to a webcam could make a better short film like 
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4th March 2007, 12:47am
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#5 | | The Awakening of Oliver
Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Glasgow
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| Re: Break-in with a twist
"Better" doesn't exist. I liked the video. | |
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4th March 2007, 1:12am
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#6 | | A Jubilant Mass Editor
Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: In a jar, mate.
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| Re: Break-in with a twist
If you want to be taken at all seriously, you're going to have to start working with other people. A writer and a couple of actors, to begin with.
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4th March 2007, 1:20am
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#7 | | Experimental stooge
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| Re: Break-in with a twist
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Originally Posted by Potatojunkie If you want to be taken at all seriously, you're going to have to start working with other people. A writer and a couple of actors, to begin with. | I would start with someone to hold the camera...
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4th March 2007, 1:26am
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#8 | | A Jubilant Mass Editor
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| Re: Break-in with a twist
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Originally Posted by endless psych I would start with someone to hold the camera... | If you're trying to direct, it makes far more sense for you to be pointing the camera at someone else.
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4th March 2007, 1:49am
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#9 | | Experimental stooge
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Originally Posted by Potatojunkie If you're trying to direct, it makes far more sense for you to be pointing the camera at someone else. | Oh I thought it was about the acting 
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5th March 2007, 12:10am
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#10 | | Registered User
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| Re: Break-in with a twist
What happens when the dream is over? I re-adjust 
yes, that video was dreadful. absolutely dreadful.
nevertheless, we can't give up now can we? 
here's another effort, parodying my efforts to amuse/entertain....
video here - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cO6nW__S6w8 | |
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13th March 2007, 12:06am
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#11 | | Registered User
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Posts: 202
| Re: Break-in with a twist
Another attempt at a showcase of my story-telling ability.
The scene is a scientist demonstrating a robot to a man in his home. (so three parts, all played by me ('cause there's noone else)
video here - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JEdzcyyQQtc | |
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