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Old 5th June 2002, 11:53am   #1
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a poem by me :P

Haylie
© Timon 2001

When I was at school you were rude
You were crude
You were all in a mood
And you blamed it on me
And it was plain to see
That you wanted to be
Out of everyone else
The biggest bitch to me

I want you to know that through all of that time
The thoughts that raced through my mind
Were not that kind
As they were involving you
Being thrown on a skew

You went and made it all worse when you decided to call me
You were really quite wrong when you thought it would be funny
I still wanna know who you got my phone number from
Don't gimme that lying shit saying you got it from some gay-dot-com

You're being like a little messed up kid
You need to be locked away with a tightly sealed lid
You're such a fucking bitch Haylie
I dunno how you can live your life daily

I'm coming after you
I'm stalking you
You better believe it when I say I’m mad with you

I'm gonna get my own back bitch-baby
Is that ok?
Would you be afraid of my AK?

I'll cut your wrist
And clench my fist
Give it a shunt
Right up your cunt
Out through your throat
Straight out the front

Then sit back and smoke weed
As I get the satisfaction I need
To see you die and bleed
At the bloody hands of me

And when you're dead and gone
I’ll have more fun
I'll get out my gun
And one by one
I’ll shoot your family and friends
You’ll all die at my hands

I'll laugh when I see
My life being free
From all the shit you gave me
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Old 5th June 2002, 12:25pm   #2
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Re: a poem by me :P

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I'll cut your wrist
And clench my fist
Give it a shunt
Right up your cunt
Out through your throat
Straight out the front

Goodness, few unresolved issues there Tim? Still Haillies a boot, I hate her. You are talkin about da blonde slagbag in Home & Away, innit?
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Old 5th June 2002, 12:35pm   #3
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Goodness, few unresolved issues there Tim? Still Haillies a boot, I hate her. You are talkin about da blonde slagbag in Home & Away, innit?
nay, some girl at school who i didnt like >
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Old 5th June 2002, 8:05pm   #5
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yes i know, its really a piss take but you obviously dont have a sense of humor
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man i wouldnt like to be her * has poems * tis shit and not evil like urs but......


Darkness moves closer
Invaiding my soul
There is no fear
as death draws near.
Wasted breath,
wasted life
forget the pain,
get the knife.
The sky is caving
my world is goin
I stand alone.
Perish



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In the middle, looking out, REJECTED
by the poison.
Misunderstood, infestation of rawness
Why can't they see it
I know why
but fuck it
DIE!!!



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Look at me, i'm flying high
floating away in the darkness of the sky
Or so it seems
this can't be right
too weak, oblivious to put up a fight.
Yet happiness seems so real
Oh i forgot,
It's just about to die
The fake cloud nine,
it's all a lie.
That day seemed the best
but now it's gone by,
thats what my life is like
when i'm on a high
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Old 5th June 2002, 8:27pm   #7
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once i get my website back up i'll stick all my poems online
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Old 5th June 2002, 10:47pm   #9
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yes i know, its really a piss take but you obviously dont have a sense of humor
I'm glad i don't if it would mean finding that amusing.
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I'm glad i don't if it would mean finding that amusing.
meh, she deservs all she can get
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below me slept a dream,
a dream made of skin.
it had no ears, nor eyes.
and how it tasted everything.
and how it screamed.
i remember the day that dream grew and opened eyes.
i remember that was the day that it died.



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I think your poem is ace man - really, thats the wat that i felt abou tmost of the peepl in my class at primary school in p7 and just the dumb clueless bi-atches that were in my year who are doing shite now - haha!!

WELL?!?!?! cant i gloat?

yep, liked that poem hun.....>>>does the mad hippy-style finger clickin thingy they do ' poem bars<<
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I think your poem is ace man - really, thats the wat that i felt abou tmost of the peepl in my class at primary school in p7 and just the dumb clueless bi-atches that were in my year who are doing shite now - haha!!

WELL?!?!?! cant i gloat?

yep, liked that poem hun.....>>>does the mad hippy-style finger clickin thingy they do ' poem bars<<
heh glad you liked it, i'll post more one day, and when i get my site back online, you'll get to see all of them*




*some i think are a bit crap but i keep them anyway.
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God Timmypup
Your poem sounds like Slipknot lyrics.
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God Timmypup
Your poem sounds like Slipknot lyrics.
I think Timmypup's poem is a great deal more inventive than ShitKnot lyrics will ever be dear.

oh the burning angst!!
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