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20th December 2002, 5:36am
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#1 | | Involuntry Ludicrosity
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Staring At The World Through The Bottom Of An Empty Pint Glass
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| Tortured Soul
i wrote this on aug 30th, dumped 2 days after i turned 20 (which i never saw her on)
Last night when the moon was high.
I felt the butterfly die.
At that point I burst into tears.
Having viewed all my worst fears.
As my stomach twisted and turned.
The remainders of that love burned.
I once had a warm chest, but now hollow instead.
All I felt was the echo of a heart that was dead.
From this moment I new the pain would never end.
Who was once a fiance now called herself a friend.
In a way Ive been untied.
But why does it leave me feeling dead inside.
But she said she would always love me and never leave.
But without a heart I didnt know what to believe.
We are too different, It wouldnt workout.
We are different there is no doubt.
But these last 3 years Ive been alive.
You were the only thing that made this life thrive.
How can I make it on my own.
I never wanted to feel this alone.
Sure you havent gone anywhere.
But all I feel is that you arent here.
After all the love that I have felt.
I dont like the hand Ive been dealt.
Although you assure me the pain would subside.
All I can feel is the fear, the tearing all burning inside.
All those memories of when I was happy twisted and coiled
Around the pain of my tortured soul.
these are the words of Xerxes | 
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20th December 2002, 2:01pm
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#2 | | Registered User
Join Date: Apr 2002
Posts: 11,692
| oh
tortured soul indeed
*hugs* | |
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20th December 2002, 7:08pm
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#3 | | Involuntry Ludicrosity
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Staring At The World Through The Bottom Of An Empty Pint Glass
Posts: 1,822
| dont worry i got 11 cans of "i luv u juice" right here to cheer me up | |
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21st December 2002, 1:16pm
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#4 | | the quintessential outlaw
Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: rollin' deep
Posts: 7,614
| awww bless
__________________ arms my only ornament my only rest - the fight | |
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25th December 2002, 10:24pm
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#5 | | the ashtray girl
Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: w/end
Posts: 1,818
| poor lil u.........i like the image at the end.....
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25th December 2002, 10:36pm
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#6 | | Involuntry Ludicrosity
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Staring At The World Through The Bottom Of An Empty Pint Glass
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| i did that one as a dedication to the words | |
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31st December 2002, 11:45am
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#7 | | i feel sick
Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: in a box
Posts: 4,861
| when me and my boyfriend broke up, i didn't want to write anything or examine how i felt, the numbness just took over
that poem does describe quite well how i felt too | |
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31st December 2002, 5:29pm
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#8 | | Changed Man V4
Join Date: May 2002 Location: Breaking into H
Posts: 32,101
| Yup, *applauds*
You hit the nail on head.
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You just lost The Game | |
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1st January 2003, 11:18pm
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#9 | | No Gimmicks Needed
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 15,801
| What did i say?? this man is an artist, and he proves it again....
Xerxes is winning the fight for your soul, oh dark one.... | |
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2nd January 2003, 3:32am
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#10 | | Involuntry Ludicrosity
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Staring At The World Through The Bottom Of An Empty Pint Glass
Posts: 1,822
| Xerxes won along time ago, Aedus is mearly a familiarity with my past anguish
Tequila tears hiding behind a smiling mask and nervous laugh | |
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